Exposition
One night, Axl and Stephenie met in the Rainbow bar. In the bar, poeple were dinking, smoking and kissing. Suddenly, a woman who was very angry went into the bar and hit Stephenie.
Rising action
Stephenie and Axl love each other too much. After a while, they suggested marrying with each other. One day before their wedding party hold, Axl drove a car and crashed that woman because Axl was still angry about what she did to Stephaine.
Climax
Axl and Stephenie got married in a church. Stephenie walked into the chuch beauitfully. When they changed the ring to each other, Axl found that he forgot to bring the ring. He was too neverous. And Alx borrowed a ring from Slash, but he was too angry so that he didn't lend a ring toAlx.Luckily,Stephaine wasn't with Alx. Then, they started the wedding party. When they were eating and drinking in the party with their friends happily. Suddenly, it fell a big rain. All the people went in the church very fast. They destroyed the food and drinks. Axl saw Slash hugged with Stephenie and he was very angry. Axl took out the gun and shot to Slash. But he shot Stephenie wrongly.Then Stephenie died.
Falling action
Axl was very sad about his wife's death. He couldn't sleep at night. He went to see the doctor. But it was not working. He coudn't forget things happened in the wedding.
Resolution
At last, Axl was too sad. He walked on the snow and killed himself.
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2 comments:
Rainbow, please check your spelling; you have a number of different spellings for Stephanie and Axl; I'm embarrassed for you - try to check what you write, to care for it, if just a little. Moreover to inconsistencies, Slash did give the rings to Axl!
I'm glad you managed to include all of the grammar items and you also put the plot in its proper stages - good work!
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Rainbow, where is your assignment? And please include all elements, columns in your portfolio - fill them out!
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